2021.09.25 19:50 RevolutionaryMind818 Wer will mal blasen
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2021.09.25 19:50 JesusMay66 I Listen To Dead People Beethoven Bach Mozart
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2021.09.25 19:50 Experiment_Magnus My entry to #ThreadsOfLight. My Dark Kmight.
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2021.09.25 19:50 Psychological_Tap975 Looking for thoughts and feedback on a “practice script” of mine. [critique]
I’ve written a brief “script” of two scenes to practice my dialogue. Essentially, the “script” is a continuation of a post (/Screenwriting/comments/p6sz30/how_do_you_avoid_as_you_know_exposition/) I submitted to the screenwriting sub a little over a month ago.
What are your thoughts on my snippet of a “script”, if any? How appropriate is my dialogue for the scenes’ scenarios and well does it convey the characters? Are there any aspects that need to be fixed?
Thank you for taking the time to read this post and I appreciate any sort of responses (regardless if they are positive or not).
Scene INT. Black Woods - evening
Two figures are riding on horseback through a dark forest undergrowth. The front rider, a rugged young guard named Terric (late teens), surveys the woods for any danger. Holding onto him is Duchess Joanna, a beautiful noblewoman (early thirties) draped in the finest silk dress.
Terric Your Grace...,
Joanna’s eyes roll.
Joanna There is no need for such formalities when it’s just the two of us. We’ve told you this many times Terric.
Terric Sorry Joanna, force of habit. But are you certain this is the right way to Baron Erik’s castle?
Joanna pulls a map out of the saddle pouch and scans it furiously.
Joanna I don’t know, we must have taken the wrong turn a mile or so back. Damn it, I can’t miss this meeting.
Terric Should we turn back Joanna?
She sighs and glances over her shoulders. Joanna is unnerved by the pitch black darkness, but puts on a brave face for her companion.
Joanna Good idea. We might be able to retrace our steps that way.
Terric pulls the reins and directs the horse backwards. A few yards ahead of them are a half dozen boulders blocking the trail.
Terric I’m very certain those rocks weren't there before.
The two look at each other in alarm and horror, as Terric reaches for his sword. Joanna frantically scans their surroundings. Suddenly an arrow swoops past Terric.
Terric and Joanna leap off the horse just before a second arrow hits it. He pushes Joanna to the ground, shielding her with his body.
Dozens of armed men from a Barbarian tribe emerge from the bushes. Terric stands back up, staring them down with sword in hand.
Terric None of you will touch her.
He braces himself for his last stand.
Joanna Drop your weapons Terric.
Terric Are you sure about this?
Joanna Stand down, that’s an order.
With much reluctance, he drops his sword and raises his arms in the air. Four warriors approach Terric, raising their spears and axes to strike him down. Terric flinches and awaits for the seeming inevitable.
Joanna Wait, wait, he’s more valuable to you alive.
Joanna jumps in between Terric and the warriors, shielding him with her body.
Chieftain What use is a lowly guard to us?
She hugs Terric tightly, kissing him on the cheek. Joanna is visibly trembling in fear, but is trying to put up a brave front.
Joanna He’s my bastard brother. Our father will be quite willing to pay handsomely for his release as well. Kill him and you’ll waste a perfectly useful hostage.
Terric is left speechless by her pleas for his life. The chieftain seems to take in everything Joanna told him and motions to his men holding rope and chains.
Chieftain Secure the prisoners.
One of the warriors ties a rope around Joanna’s waist and then binds the loose end around Terric. Joanna’s wrists and neck are shackled together with a loose chain attached to the wrist cuffs. Terric’s hands are tied behind his back. The warriors finish by gagging their captives.
Chieftain Take them to the village.
He personally grabs the loose chain around Joanna’s wrist cuffs and pulls it forward. Terric and Joanna exchange looks as they’re dragged into the forest undergrowth. The other warriors follow suit, pushing their hostages forward.
Fade to :
INT. Barbarian village - Midnight
Joanna and Terric are tied together to a pillar inside a storage hut. Terric violently pulls and tugs at their restraints.
Joanna Terric my dear lad, please stop struggling. You're only making the ropes tighter.
He pauses for a second and turns his tear filled eyes towards Joanna.
Terric I’m sorry for failing to protect you from those savages. Father is going to have me imprisoned or hanged for this.
Joanna Terric, you were alone against dozens. There is nothing you could’ve done differently. He will perfectly understand.
Terric Even still, everyone in the castle and village will think of me as a coward. I’ll be laughed out of the land. I should have died defending you.
Joanna gasps in disbelief. Her eyes are starting to water up.
Joanna Please don’t say that.
Terric At least I would have some honor left in me. Why did you insist on them letting me live? What does a common guard and lowly bastard mean to you anyway?
Joanna You’re as part of my family as our father and my mother, my husband and children, and our sisters. I love you brother and your birth status means nothing to me.
Terric is dumbfounded by her declaration to him. He struggles to come up with a response, but nothing comes out. Joanna rests her head on his shoulders and rubs her flowing hair on him.
Joanna All that matters now is that I’m not alone. Besides, you’ll be seen as a hero for simply surviving those savages. This will be over soon enough, we’ll be safe at home before you know it.
Joanna rests her eyes and struggles to sleep. Terric watches as she slumbers on his shoulders.
Terric Good night Joanna. I love you too dear sister.
Terric gently nudges his head against her forehead. He also feels drowsy and slowly drifts off to sleep as well.
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2021.09.25 19:50 MilitaryUA На Одещині прикордонники отримали нову техніку
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2021.09.25 19:50 WhyAmILikeMe When I read about the proposed OCC rule change
2021.09.25 19:50 AvRack-le-buttcrack What are your thoughts on this. Many similarities with quests in hots.
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2021.09.25 19:50 truest22 A CPL (Committee for the Liberation of Paris) fighter with a captured STG44 near the central Paris police Commissariat, August 24, 1944.
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2021.09.25 19:50 AutumnYuki Selling pets bc a lot off people are doing it now, (cat-Roxy, Dog-Coco, pink cow- Daisy
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2021.09.25 19:50 Eastern_Pomelo_7822 Hello Fresh 4 Free Boxes to Giveaway
2021.09.25 19:50 AdFeeling3723 True innit ?
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2021.09.25 19:50 JesusMay66 I Listen To Dead People Beethoven Bach Mozart
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2021.09.25 19:50 Hannahhannahhi SOS why are his leaves drooping !!
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2021.09.25 19:50 Competitive_Hold4678 Moodswings. Please help
what's wrong with me. I have quite extreme mood swings. There are times I have shit high self confidence, feel like the king of the world for a few days, sometimes just a few hours. then I get really depressed, hate myself, think that my friends are after me and hate me that way I can also be for a couple of hours or days. then there come periods I am shit aggressive and get very easily annoyed. I do not want to say that I have manic episodes but it is often I suddenly decide to train like hell, or become an outsider, become a shaman and such what should i do to become normal
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2021.09.25 19:50 BDawgJackson Strappy
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2021.09.25 19:50 DragonImpulse Where are the "Generate Images" and "Audio Narration" features?
The AI dungeon website advertises the features to "generate images for your story" and "audio narration of your adventure" for the Dragon model.
I'm currently on the Gold subscription and turned on the Dragon model in the settings, but can't see any options for image generation or narration. No mention of those things on the help page or Wiki either, as far as I can see.
Does anyone know how to access them?
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2021.09.25 19:50 Fuppatruppa6969 It’s hilarious how Ethan loves Jenna Marbles so much
It’s hilarious he loves her so much but doesn’t know about the fact that one of his rivals Barstool Sports is actually the ones who got her career started out as a personality and she later left Barstool Sports and went on to become who she is now and Dave Portnoy CANT STAND her. It would be something funny to stir the pot a little and I’m sure if Ethan knew it was would be a funny thing to watch him react to
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2021.09.25 19:50 TheChumOfChance Chest and Throat Tension
I've been off for about a year and a month, and the clarity I've gained is amazing, I feel my happy chemicals are firing again, but a lot of my lingering symptoms seem physical.
I still feel tension in my chest and throat, and have one or two deep chest sneezes a day if that makes sense.
Has anyone else dealt with this or know of things to alleviate it?
Keep at it everybody, clarity and presence are a better high than THC.
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2021.09.25 19:50 im_only_here_for_lud NEW GAME CONFIRMED AAAAAAA
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2021.09.25 19:50 Emerald_Alpha Looking into a 2011-2013 3.6R Legacy as an upgrade to my current 2011 forester, any thoughts?
Want something with a bit more power, and a sedan rather than an SUV. Wanting something with AWD as well and have enjoyed how my current forester feels.
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2021.09.25 19:50 a47bode This game is amazing
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I always liked Dishonored but I never beat any of them something happened for me in each game mid way through where I just lost interest.
Deathloop on the other hand I am more and more intrigued every moment I spend in the game. The story,characters,gameplay,concepts, originality, and vision are all just so enticing and fun.
Unraveling this puzzle and pulling off these assisnations reminds me of one grand Hitman mission and as a huge Hitman fan it just really does it for me.
All I can say is anyone that has been hesitant to buy this game don't be. There is literally something for everyone and you will naturally play the game to your strengths and weaknesses and to what you view as fun.
I hope everyone has a great day experimenting in this amazing game. Great job Arkane Studios BRAVO
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